Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Shit happens (more so in an obscenely crowded bus)

So, am one of those mass produced corporate employees who know their lives depend on catching the office bus at 6:30 pm.......every weekday....and of course, am not too lucky......so....this is dedicated to all the mass produced corporate employees who HAVE to catch an obscenely crowded office bus at 6:30 pm...every weekday:

Things that may go wrong on an obscenely crowded office bus:

1) You know that the laws of the universe are twisted when you have been waiting for the bus for more than an hour...and all u see are buses that have "God is Great" written on them.

2) After waiting for an hour, you "THINK" your bus has come and as a responsible citizen you alert all your colleagues who get all happy and prepared to get into the bus and lo... (with my kinda luck it isn't too tough to imagine what happens next...Hint: it involves a lot angry stares).

3) You take your seat in the bus and the girl sitting next to you is carrying this giant ass umbrella (the kind that can save a crowd from the rain). And due to space constraints, she has no other option but to keep the umbrella at a certain angle where it can't help but poke you.

4) You are super annoyed. Why? Because the bus has stopped at a signal and there are a whole lotta assholes honking away to glory (because they believe honking helps) and noise is killing your soothing heavy metal rock music experience (it is strange how the honks give you a headache and not heavy metal rock).

5) You can't help but sense that something somewhere is not right....as if this world isn't wired correctly...I mean...how come it takes the bus 1 hour to reach the express highway from my office (which is in Andheri east ) and just 7 minutes to cover the distance between Andheri and Bandra (my stop)???

6) You are sitting at an angle where you have no other option but to stare at a guys ass.

7) You realize that someone is farting his/her ass off and every time the bus stops....the experience becomes excruciatingly painful.

8) You are so touched by your Einsteinian thought process that you get an uncontrollable urge to (no..not to pee) put your observations on a piece of paper. You go on a mad hunting spree and scout for a pencil and a note pad (a Herculian task when a bus is obscenely crowded) and you finally succeed. You spend most of the rest of the journey trying to jot down your kick-ass observations.

9) While you being all smart and all, you get a sudden feeling that you have missed your stop. You make a mad scramble, cursing people as you make your way to the exit door. With a sense of relief and achievement you get off....only to realize that you got off a little too soon. As the bus passes you by, you can see the faces of all those you cursed and somehow you know that they know. Of course, once you get over the embarrassing feeling, you start walking towards your stop which is a kilometer away.

10) Once you reach your destination...all you think about is putting your amazingly profound thoughts on your blog....with superb excitement, you reach home...switch-on your lappy..take out your note pad and voila! You can't make out a single word you wrote! You can almost see a wickedly mocking smile on your lappy's screen.

Amidst all the pushing and sweating and cursing and staring, you realize that it isn't the bus that is mocking you. It's the corporate experience. It makes you believe that you are oh-so-smart...while you struggle to make your way home in an obscenely crowded bus-----every weekday...

15 comments:

Nitcoolish said...

AWesome!!!!!
Beautifully put down..definitely nt frm the notes in ur bus...
Keep going :)

Anonymous said...

Heavy Metal ?? didn't know..

Anonymous said...

Your experience mentioned in the 7th point would have been more profound in the "morning bus" considering most of us guys have "aloo ka paranthas" and "samosas" for our breakfast. :-))
Hope you don't mind me critiquing your thoughts, it's become a habit QAing for IVG.

Bhavna said...

@all : thanks for the prompt comments :)

@Lookingforthepill: is this sanky? :P

writer's block said...

nice.....i damn well agree with everything......well put dude

Aayush said...

Aaawwwwesummmmmm!!!!
n ur language....super awesummm!!

Bhavna said...

@writer's block & aayush : thanks :)

smrati said...

gr8888....well put thoughts showing ur experience!!!!!!

rjk said...

hilarious! well written and I too didn't know you were into heavy metal.

Bhavna said...

well..in my dictionary, 'coldplay' is heavy metal :P

Anonymous said...

ahh coldplay=heavy metal.. mystery solved :D
and of course this is sanky .. but why the ':P'

Bhavna said...

@sanky: coz i thot u may tk offence on realizing that i didnt recognize you....so...thot a smiley may pump up the cute meter and make u fl less offended :P

Anonymous said...

when have you seen me take offence over anything :S I am very understanding like that.
And your cute meter is always pumped up to max. as far as I am concerned ;) So you don't need to worry about it :D

Nachi said...

well it's a fair trick, learning how to doze off in a crowded bus. you might want to try your hand at that.

i like the new look of the blog. its been ages since i blogged. the corporates are killing our old way of life.

...but the times they are a changing.

:)

Bhavna said...

@nachi : felt nice 2 c a long drawn comment from a busy you :)thanks...

and start bloggin again!